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Written Critique Session

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Kidlit Writing Academy Tier 2

Written Critique - $97

Critique includes:

  • Either review of a full picture book manuscript or the first 10-pages of your chapter book or novel
  • Positive aspects of your story
  • Notes on your cast of characters & ways to improve or develop them further
  • Analysis of your plot & how to improve or update your structure to make it better
  • Story elements that require the most attention right now
  • Notes on Voice, Marketability, & what to work on next
  • Pre-recorded Loom video from Brooke explaining the notes

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All critiques are delivered one week after story is received. Please send either a Word Doc or PDF of your story to our support team at Thank you for your business!